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Post by starcrystal on Mar 6, 2004 20:43:09 GMT -5
This is a new site containing portions of a sequel to ROTK I wrote, called "Breaking of the Doom." Please feel free to read it and post comments. Any critique welcome!  arwensoracle.tripod.com/breakingofthedoomI drew a lot on the history from the Silmarillion in this... |
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Post by Ilúvatar on Mar 7, 2004 1:50:31 GMT -5
Wow lots to read - I will have to find some time to read it all. Right now it is almost 1:30 in the morning for me and must get to bed. But I will read some and post my comments soon.
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Post by Legolas on Mar 8, 2004 19:18:57 GMT -5
i skimmed it. i'll read the rest later, but it feels tolkien-like. i don't know how to describe it.
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Post by starcrystal on Mar 9, 2004 19:35:28 GMT -5
What i have up on the site is bits and pieces that could eventually be expanded into chapters. I think a basic plot is there though. Doubt I'd ever have the time to get anywhere near as much detail as Tolkien, and I have to be inspired and get in a Tolkienish frame of mind as well....
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Post by Nimrodel Anduinel on Mar 11, 2004 21:39:39 GMT -5
I'm afraid I only skimmed it, but it looks great! I love how you used some old English in it, deffinatly makes it like Tolkien! ;D
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Post by starcrystal on Mar 22, 2004 21:42:27 GMT -5
I tried my best to use a Tolkien style of writing, which one has to be in the right spirit or mood to do. He used some archaic english wording throughout his works, which is one thing that makes his writing unique. If I ever get such inspiration again I might add some more to the storyline....
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Post by Earendur on May 20, 2004 21:51:56 GMT -5
looks interesting...dont' have enough time to look at it now, but i WILL check it out later.
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