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Post by Goblinglow on Sept 14, 2004 19:41:59 GMT -5
((Orc based.))
"Once a Child of Iluvitar"
Beauty, perfection and knowledge together
Who could ever ask for anything more?
Well, they did become more, they'll remain forever
Cruel heartless creatures straight to the core
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Once a fair Elf, now a cruel monster
Made only for the purpose to destroy
The lands that aren't theirs, but they will conquer
For they fear no emotions with which they are devoid
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Their spirit, their wills are connected somehow
To the master of Evil who brought them there
Thanks to his dark powers and his wicked know-how
These horrible creatures would never be fair
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And it was agreed in the halls of Valinor
To be the worst ever deed in Middle-earth
The Elves would remain in darkness ever-more
Never again to know joy or happiness, comfort or mirth
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However no one would know if a light still remains
In our poor creatures' soul, if hope is still kindled
But the spirit of an Elf is strong, whatever it contains
No matter if love in itself has been dwindled
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There once was a child of Iluvitar
Fair and merry, wise and gentle
Their wholeness, drawn through and far
But the true battle of them was only mental
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Post by Haerodiel on Oct 3, 2004 15:52:30 GMT -5
Good! I have trouble thinking of words that ryme and putting them in a poem. U sure like orcs, don't you?
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Post by Goblinglow on Oct 4, 2004 15:23:28 GMT -5
Yes, I do. ^^; And thank you. ![:D](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v347/Hannah22/Fourm/grin.gif)
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