Post by LOTRfreak on Mar 26, 2004 23:02:08 GMT -5
Its an okay poem, nothing special. It's also posted on my LOTR site. Please leave comments.
- As he turned around to say goodbye,
- He saw Sam,Merry,and Pippin let out a cry,
- His blue eyes glew and he gave a slight smile,
- But never did he say "Ill be back in a little while."
- He stepped on the ship and began to sail away.
- There the 3 hobbits watched on the bay
- the ship grew smaller following the horizon,
- soon be no more than an empty setting sky.
- As he turned around to say goodbye,
- He saw Sam,Merry,and Pippin let out a cry,
- His blue eyes glew and he gave a slight smile,
- But never did he say "Ill be back in a little while."
- He stepped on the ship and began to sail away.
- There the 3 hobbits watched on the bay
- the ship grew smaller following the horizon,
- soon be no more than an empty setting sky.
I plan on making more poems..just gotta find the time. heehee