Other Peoples Poetry

[Nimrodel Anduinel]

I don't write enough LoTR's poetry to have a whole thread for myself, so this is for everbody who want's to use it.

Ok, this poem was inspired by the eternity of elves and their passing onto the Grey Havens. Kind of hard to believe, but really it was! ;D

Eternity

The flowers fade and the leaves fall
The shadow of time will come over all
Yet through the bad times and the good
One thing has always stood
The morning light comes over the mountain
Diamonds sparkle in water of the fountain
We laugh and we cry
Thinking time might pass us by
But all we know shall fade someday
All we know will pass away
Someday dark shall cover light
Blackness will cover all that is bright
Even time will sometime end
The power of passing years will bend
Time will fall into the chasm of endless sleep
The grip of death will whither and weep
The power of a heart beat
The tide of power from the far deep
Every intake of the Breath of Life
Leaving behind the story of strife
Resting in the supremacy of peace
From the greatest to the least
All these things shall pass beyond
For Life will go ever on and on…

[Legolas]

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[Nimrodel Anduinel]

[glow=orange,2,300]thanx![/glow]

[Lady of Light]

[glow=navy,2,300]I Like it!!!![/glow]

[Nimrodel Anduinel]

This was written completely by accident, if that could ever really happen...

SAM'S PROMISE

I feel the cold of your touch
I see the pain in your eyes
You feel only the desperation
You see only emptiness as you die

I know that life’s been cruel
I know the hopelessness you feel
I know what’s killing you
Cold as steel

But there’s a light on the horizon
I won’t let you die
Don’t give up now
I’ll carry you, I’ll carry you to the sunrise

Because when everything fades away
When Time at last will end
This world will be over
Our souls will live again

You never deserted me
I won’t leave you alone
Can’t you hear the voices?
We’re being called home

Lean on my shoulder
Lift your eyes to the light
Someone’s calling your name
This is the final end of night

Because when Time at last will end
Our souls will live again
And I’ll carry you
Carry you to the end…
Of Time…

[Arwen]

I like both poems! You're very good at it...keep it up!

[Manwë Súlimo]

TEXT Sadly I could never write that good.

[Aislinn]

Excellent Poems both of them.

[Elanor]

My Sam

Voices wither,
Darkness grows
In my heart I felt so cold
I was lost and all alone,
could not see my path
Because of your faith I survived
Found my way in life again
Thank you
for being my Sam

[Lady of Light]

Ah, thats very good elanor!

[Elanor]

Thanks Galadriel, it's certainly very atomic..
elanor